The Golden Week holidays will end soon.

The soccer games which were held for three days were finally over.
I'm tired now.
After all I didn't do anything except watching games and chatting with mothers during days. However we could get to know each other better.
Many fathers also came to watch the games. I wish my husband came too.

The second day was very windy. There was only one cherry tree in the corner of the ground. It was in full blossoms and very beautiful, but the strong wind made some of blossoms fall.

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I want to relax and make my clothes at home tomorrow.




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Original Article:

The soccer games which were held for three days were finally over.
I'm tired now.
After all I didn't do anything except watching games and chatting with mothers during days. However we could get to know each other better.
Many fathers also came to watch the games. I wish my husband came too.

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Recommended Corrections:

My son's three day long soccer tournament is finally over. I am tired now. All I had done for three days was to watch the soccer games and to chat with the other mothers. However, as we got the chance to know each other better, I am glad we had chatted.

Many fathers were also at the games. I wish my husband had gone too.

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Original Article:


The second day was very windy. There was only one cherry tree in the corner of the ground. It was in full blossoms and very beautiful, but the strong wind made some of blossoms fall.

I want to relax and make my clothes at home tomorrow.

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Recommended Corrections:


The second day of the tournament was very windy. In a corner of the tournament grounds, there was a solitary cherry tree in full bloom. Although the strong winds had made some of the blossoms fall off, it was still very beautiful.

All I wish to do tomorrow is to stay home and relax while I make some more clothes for my family.


Re: English Corrections

Hi, shiroi tora

Thank you very much for the correction.

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What a nice tree! It makes a lovely, colorful carpet.

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Hi, Always visiting.

Thank you for your comment.
This tree was a weeping cherry. It was so beautiful.
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I like handmade things and Ikebana(arranging flowers).
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