They were too long.

It was the first time in more than a decade for me to attend a workshop of Ikebana (arranging flowers).
I was a little nervous, but since my teacher had told some members about me, they were kind to me. Actually, I had wanted to sit in the back to see how others arranged, but I had to sit in the front row. However, the woman next to me was very kind, so I could arranged without a problem.

The result was not so good. The stems were too long. The professor from Kanagawa Pref. had marked my arrangement advised me a lot of things.
I was a little embarrassed, but it was a good learning for me.
I'm looking forward to attending it next month.

↓The professor's two works
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After the workshop, when I was walking outside, a streetcar was running. Since it seemed that its appearance was the most popular among streetcars here, some people were taking pictures of it.

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Original Article:

It was the first time in more than a decade for me to attend a workshop of Ikebana (arranging flowers).
I was a little nervous, but since my teacher had told some members about me, they were kind to me. Actually, I had wanted to sit in the back to see how others arranged, but I had to sit in the front row. However, the woman next to me was very kind, so I could arranged without a problem.

The result was not so good. The stems were too long. The professor from Kanagawa Pref. had marked my arrangement advised me a lot of things.
I was a little embarrassed, but it was a good learning for me.
I'm looking forward to attending it next month.

↓The professor's two works

After the workshop, when I was walking outside, a streetcar was running. Since it seemed that its appearance was the most popular among streetcars here, some people were taking pictures of it.


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Recommended Corrections:

It was the first time in more than a decade for me to attend an Ikebana (flower arranging) workshop.
I was a little nervous, but since my teacher had told some members about me, they were kind to me. Actually, I had wanted to sit in the back to see how others arranged, but I had to sit in the front row. However, the woman next to me was very kind, so I could arrange without a problem.

The result was not so good. The stems were too long. The professor from Kanagawa Pref. who had marked my arrangement, had made many corrections to my work.
I was a little embarrassed, but it was a good learning experience for me.
I'm looking forward to attending another workshop next month.

↓The professor's two works

After the workshop, while I was walking outside, a streetcar picked up, and dropped off, some of its passengers. Since the appearance of a street car seemed to be an unusual occurrence to some people, some of them took pictures of it.

Re: English Corrections

Hi, Shiroi Tora.

Thank you so much for the corrections.
I think this street car is the oldest and nostalgic, so it is popular with people.

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What a nice street car!

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Hi, Always visiting.

Yes, I like the best of all.
I sometimes see it, but I've never taken it.
Thank you for your comment.
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I'm married and we have a son. I live in Hokkaido, Japan.
I like handmade things and Ikebana(arranging flowers).
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