Ikebana Sunday Workshop 7/17/2016

The other day, I visited Goryokaku Park after a while.

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Today, I joined an Ikebana Sunday Workshop.

↓The professor's two works.
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↓A work which was evaluated 95 /100 points with a standing placard reward. It is not mine, unfortunately.
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↓I had arranged this.
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↓The professor altered mine (↑) I had arranged.
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Do you know what the difference is between them?
The professor advised me that the bigger water lily be more left.







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English Corrections

Original Article:

The other day, I visited Goryokaku Park after a while.

Today, I joined an Ikebana Sunday Workshop.

↓The professor's two works.

↓A work which was evaluated 95 /100 points with a standing placard reward. It is not mine, unfortunately.

↓I had arranged this.

↓The professor altered mine (↑) I had arranged.

Do you know what the difference is between them?
The professor advised me that the bigger water lily be more left.


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Recommended Corrections:

The other day, I visited Goryokaku Park for the first time in a while.

Today, I joined an Ikebana Sunday Workshop.

↓The professor's two works.

↓A work which was evaluated with 95 /100 points got a standing placard award. Unfortunately, this arrangement was not mine.

↓I had arranged this.

↓The professor altered mine. I had arranged the above one (↑).

Do you know what the difference is between them?

The professor advised me that the bigger water lily should be more to the left.


Re: English Corrections

Hello, Shiroi Tora.

Thank you so much for the corrections.
I was confused 'award' with 'reward'.
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I'm married and we have a son. I live in Hokkaido, Japan.
I like handmade things and Ikebana(arranging flowers).
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