placenta extract

I really want to look younger, but I look older.

One day in last winter, two of my friends and I went to have lunch together.
Over the lunch, one of my friends told me that she goes to a doctor to get a shot of placenta extract once a month. She told me that it is good especially for skin and it makes your skin younger. She also said that her hair grows fast.
To my surprise, the other friend also gets the shot periodically.

As I was listening to them, I was interested in it. They told me how well it worked.
They said that it was not so expensive, but I thought that it seemed to be used by celebrities. Moreover, I hate shots and it is troublesome for me to go to a doctor every month. Although the placenta extract was from humans, I wondered whether or not it has side effects.

However, when I turned on a TV last month, a bottle of placenta extract was promoted by chance.
I was glued to the TV promotion. Although it is from pigs, I thought that the lotion was better than a shot for me. Besides, it was a resonable price for only the first time.
I called to buy one soon after watching it.

I can't tell difference things usually, so, I decided to put it on my half face which is worse than the other. I mean that my left side of my face has deeper wrinkles. If it works well, it will become better than the right one. It will be easy for me to distinguish between them.

I have used it for a few weeks. I think that my blotches became lighter. I'll see when the bottle runs out.



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Original Article:

I really want to look younger, but I look older.

One day in last winter, two of my friends and I went to have lunch together.
Over the lunch, one of my friends told me that she goes to a doctor to get a shot of placenta extract once a month. She told me that it is good especially for skin and it makes your skin younger. She also said that her hair grows fast.
To my surprise, the other friend also gets the shot periodically.

As I was listening to them, I was interested in it. They told me how well it worked.
They said that it was not so expensive, but I thought that it seemed to be used by celebrities. Moreover, I hate shots and it is troublesome for me to go to a doctor every month. Although the placenta extract was from humans, I wondered whether or not it has side effects.

However, when I turned on a TV last month, a bottle of placenta extract was promoted by chance.
I was glued to the TV promotion. Although it is from pigs, I thought that the lotion was better than a shot for me. Besides, it was a resonable price for only the first time.
I called to buy one soon after watching it.

I can't tell difference things usually, so, I decided to put it on my half face which is worse than the other. I mean that my left side of my face has deeper wrinkles. If it works well, it will become better than the right one. It will be easy for me to distinguish between them.

I have used it for a few weeks. I think that my blotches became lighter. I'll see when the bottle runs out.



TOEIC Test 新公式問題集 Vol.6

2016
6/7PracticeTest1-Listening88/100, Reading77/100
7/16  ditto   Listening95/100, Reading91/100
7/17  ditto  Listening100/100, Reading100/100

7/18PracticeTest2-Listening86/100, Reading78/100
8/6  ditto    Listening97/100, Reading99/100
8/7  ditto    Listening100/100, Reading100/100


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Recommended Corrections:

I really want to look younger than my age, but I am afraid I look older.

One day last winter, two of my friends and I went to have lunch together.
Over lunch, one of my friends told me that she goes to a doctor to get a shot of placenta extract once a month. She told me that it works especially well on skin, as it makes your skin appear to be younger. She also said that her hair grows faster.
To my surprise, the other friend also gets the shot periodically.

As I listened to them, I became interested in it. They told me how well it worked.
I thought that it was used just by celebrities. But, they told me that the procedure was not so expensive.
However, I hate shots, and it is too troublesome for me to go to a doctor every month. Although the placenta extract was from humans, I wondered whether or not it has side effects.

However, when I turned on the TV last month, just by chance, a bottle of placenta extract lotion was being promoted.
I was glued to the TV promotion. Although it is made the placental extract from pigs, I thought that the lotion suited me more than a shot would. Besides, it was being sold at a reasonable price for first time buyers.
I called to buy one soon after watching it.

Had I applied it to my whole face, I am afraid I wouldn't have been able to notice any difference, so, I decided to put it on the older appearing half of my face. The left side of my face actually has deeper wrinkles, so, if it works well, the left side of my face will soon appear to be younger than the right side. It will then be easy for me to distinguish between them.

I have used it for a few weeks. I think that the blotches on the left side of my face have become lighter. I'll see when the bottle runs out.



TOEIC Test 新公式問題集 Vol.6

2016
6/7PracticeTest1-Listening88/100, Reading77/100
7/16  ditto   Listening95/100, Reading91/100
7/17  ditto  Listening100/100, Reading100/100

7/18PracticeTest2-Listening86/100, Reading78/100
8/6  ditto    Listening97/100, Reading99/100
8/7  ditto    Listening100/100, Reading100/100

Re: English Corrections

Hi, Shiroi Tora.

Thank you very much for the corrections.

I wish I could use the inversion such as 'Had I applied it...'.
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