Ikebana 10/19/2016

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I had composed this arrangement of Gentian (リンドウ), Small Chrysanthemum (小菊), Leatherleaf Fern (レザーファン), and Burnet (ワレモコウ).

This arrangement can be seen from any directions. My teacher told me that don't use the full blooming chrysanthemums.


I usually have checkups in October yearly. I had teeth, eyes, women's, and general checkups.
My teeth were OK, but a visual field of my right eye got worse. So, I take eye drops twice a day.
I'm waiting for the result of general and women's checkups.
I hate to have checkups, but I must undergo them.




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Original Article:

I had composed this arrangement of Gentian (リンドウ), Small Chrysanthemum (小菊), Leatherleaf Fern (レザーファン), and Burnet (ワレモコウ).

This arrangement can be seen from any directions. My teacher told me that don't use the full blooming chrysanthemums.


I usually have checkups in October yearly. I had teeth, eyes, women's, and general checkups.
My teeth were OK, but a visual field of my right eye got worse. So, I take eye drops twice a day.
I'm waiting for the result of general and women's checkups.
I hate to have checkups, but I must undergo them.

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Recommended Corrections:


I had composed this arrangement of Gentian (リンドウ), Small Chrysanthemum (小菊), Leatherleaf Fern (レザーファン), and Burnet (ワレモコウ).

This arrangement *may be seen from any direction. My teacher told me to not use full blooming chrysanthemums.

*In general...'can' means possibility. 'May' usually means in keeping with the context of the sentence, or one is asking permission. In this case...the arrangement may be seen without loss of effect, from any direction, because of the way the arrangement was originally designed.


I usually have my annual checkups in October. I just had my Dental, Optometric, Ob/Gyn, and general checkups.
My teeth were OK, but the visual field of my right eye has gotten worse. So, I use eye drops twice a day.
I'm waiting for the results of my general and Ob/Gyn checkups.
I hate having checkups, but I must undergo them.


Re: English Corrections

Hi, Shiroi Tora.

Thank you very much for the corrections and the explanation about 'can' and 'may'.
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I'm married and we have a son. I live in Hokkaido, Japan.
I like handmade things and Ikebana(arranging flowers).
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