It was snowing here.

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A few days ago, I found many birds on the electric wires. I didn't know what name of the birds, but they were bigger than sparrows. I was relieved that I didn't walk under them.


This morning, I saw snowing here for the first time in this season.
When it was around noon, the snow stopped.
I then went shopping at a large book store, a kind of mall, in the afternoon. A new import shop was opened, and free coffee were served there. A staff member serving the coffee said that enjoy your coffee looking around the products inside the shop.
The coffee was hot and sweet. It made me feel better. At the first section, sweets and snacks for Christmas were featured.
I bought some Christmas presents there.
I enjoyed shopping today.

When I came home, I felt like eating something hot for supper tonight.

Mille Feuille Hot Pot (before heated)
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Original Article:

A few days ago, I found many birds on the electric wires. I didn't know what name of the birds, but they were bigger than sparrows. I was relieved that I didn't walk under them.


This morning, I saw snowing here for the first time in this season.
When it was around noon, the snow stopped.
I then went shopping at a large book store, a kind of mall, in the afternoon. A new import shop was opened, and free coffee were served there. A staff member serving the coffee said that enjoy your coffee looking around the products inside the shop.
The coffee was hot and sweet. It made me feel better. At the first section, sweets and snacks for Christmas were featured.
I bought some Christmas presents there.
I enjoyed shopping today.

When I came home, I felt like eating something hot for supper tonight.

Mille Feuille Hot Pot (before heated)

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Recommended Corrections:

A few days ago, I saw many birds perched on the power lines. I don't know what type of birds they were, but they were bigger than sparrows. I am glad that I didn't walk underneath them.


This morning we had our first snow fall of the season.
However, around noon, it stopped snowing.
This afternoon, I went to a kind of mall and went shopping at a large book store. Also, a new import shop had opened, and they served free coffee. A staff member serving the coffee told me to enjoy the coffee as I looked around their shop.

The coffee was hot and sweet. It made me feel better. In the first section, sweets and snacks for Christmas were featured.
I bought some Christmas presents there.
I enjoyed shopping today.

When I got home, I felt like eating something hot for supper.

Mille Feuille Hot Pot (before being cooked)

Re: English Corrections

Hello, Shiroi Tora.

Thank you so much for the corrections.
Wow, there were so many! I learned a lot.
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I'm married and we have a son. I live in Hokkaido, Japan.
I like handmade things and Ikebana(arranging flowers).
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