Ikebana 11/9/2016

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I had composed this arrangement of Japanese Alder (ハンノキ), Babyhands(木苺ベビーハンズ), and Small Chrysanthemum (小菊).

This style is called Landscape Moribana, which expresses scenic beauty. The left expresses land while the right expresses water. The plants are arranged as if there were an autumn wind blowing from left to right.


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I got the results of my health checkups.
They were not so good, but I was relieved that they were not so serious.

My cholesterol level is very high, so I have to go to a doctor to get treatment. [F]
My white blood cell is under the standard level. [D]
I have a small lump in my breast. It's not a cancer, but I also have to go to a doctor. [D]

I also get a few [B]s.


Decision Criteria
[A] No problem.
[B] A little problem, but it's OK.
[C] Get recheck.
[D] Go to a doctor to get follow-up.
[E] Have a detailed examination.
[F] Get treatment.




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Original Article:

I had composed this arrangement of Japanese Alder (ハンノキ), Babyhands(木苺ベビーハンズ), and Small Chrysanthemum (小菊).

This style is called Landscape Moribana, which expresses scenic beauty. The left expresses land while the right expresses water. The plants are arranged as if there were an autumn wind blowing from left to right.

I got the results of my health checkups.
They were not so good, but I was relieved that they were not so serious.

My cholesterol level is very high, so I have to go to a doctor to get treatment. [F]
My white blood cell is under the standard level. [D]
I have a small lump in my breast. It's not a cancer, but I also have to go to a doctor. [D]

I also get a few [B]s.


Decision Criteria
[A] No problem.
[B] A little problem, but it's OK.
[C] Get recheck.
[D] Go to a doctor to get follow-up.
[E] Have a detailed examination.
[F] Get treatment.


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Recommended Correction:

I had composed this arrangement of Japanese Alder (ハンノキ), Babyhands(木苺ベビーハンズ), and Small Chrysanthemum (小菊).

This style is called Landscape Moribana, which expresses scenic beauty. The left expresses land while the right expresses water. The plants are arranged as if there were an autumn wind blowing from left to right.

I got the results of my health checkups.
They were not so good, but I was relieved that they were not so serious.

My cholesterol level is very high, so I have to go to a doctor to get treatment. [F]
My white blood cell is under the standard level. [D]
I have a small lump in my breast. It's not a cancer, but I also have to go to a doctor. [D]

I also get a few [B]s.


Decision Criteria
[A] No problem.
[B] A little problem, but it's OK.
[C] Get rechecked.*
[D] Go to a doctor to get a follow-up.*
[E] Have a detailed examination.
[F] Get treatment.


* - Just two small corrections. I added the 'ed' to the end of recheck,
and I added an 'a' before follow-up. Otherwise...perfect.

You could have also said - 'Get a recheck', and you could have also said, 'Go to a doctor to follow up.'


Re: English Corrections

Hi, Shiroi Tora.

Thank you so much for the corrections.
I was glad that there were few corrections on this article.
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Welcome to my blog.
I'm married and we have a son. I live in Hokkaido, Japan.
I like handmade things and Ikebana(arranging flowers).
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