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Ikebana 2/22/2017 for the Girls' Festival

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I had composed this arrangement of Peach Blossom (桃), Iris (アイリス), Alstroemeria (アルストロメリア), and Leatherleaf Fern (レザーファン).

These dolls were made by my Ikebana teacher's mother.
As you may know, I like handmade things. They make me feel warm.

The other day, I attended a funeral. I wore a black coat and a black scarf which my aunt had made a long time ago. She gave me them a few years ago. The coat is elaborate. I'll write a letter about it to her. I hope she will be pleased to hear this.




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Original Article:

I had composed this arrangement of Peach Blossom (桃), Iris (アイリス), Alstroemeria (アルストロメリア), and Leatherleaf Fern (レザーファン).

These dolls were made by my Ikebana teacher's mother.
As you may know, I like handmade things. They make me feel warm.

The other day, I attended a funeral. I wore a black coat and a black scarf which my aunt had made a long time ago. She gave me them a few years ago. The coat is elaborate. I'll write a letter about it to her. I hope she will be pleased to hear this.

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Recommended Corrections:

I had composed this arrangement of Peach Blossom (桃), Iris (アイリス), Alstroemeria (アルストロメリア), and Leatherleaf Fern (レザーファン).

These dolls were made by my Ikebana teacher's mother.
As you may know, I like handmade things. They make me feel warm.

The other day, I attended a funeral. I wore a black coat and a black scarf which my aunt had made a long time ago. She gave me them a few years ago. The coat is elaborate. I'll write a letter about it to her. I hope she will be pleased to hear this.


Re: English Corrections

Hello, Shiroi Tora.

Thank you very much for the corrections.

I compared my original article with the corrections twice.
I was very happy to see that there were no mistakes. It was the first time for me.
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Welcome to my blog.
I'm married and we have a son. I live in Hokkaido, Japan.
I like handmade things and Ikebana(arranging flowers).
I hope that you enjoy my articles and photos.

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