Ikebana 4/4/2018

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I had composed this arrangement of Viburnum Furcatum (虫狩/ムシカリ), Rose (バラ), and Gold dust dracaena (ゴッドセフィアナ) for a monthly Ikebana test.

Several days later, I took the test today.
I found some flower buds of the Fuki near the parking lot.

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A professor from Kagawa Prefecture arranged two works for us there.

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When my mother got in critical condition a few months ago, the doctor recommended that close people for her come and see her. When I heard from my brother about it on the phone, I regreted one thing. That was what I had turned down my mother's offer. She had asked me to go to the hot springs together before.

She had had pneumonia, but she recovered fortunately. The doctor said that it was a miracle.
I took my son to see my parents during his spring vacation. I then went to the hot springs with my mother. I was glad to fulfill her wish.




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Original Article:


I had composed this arrangement of Viburnum Furcatum (虫狩/ムシカリ), Rose (バラ), and Gold dust dracaena (ゴッドセフィアナ) for a monthly Ikebana test.

Several days later, I took the test today.
I found some flower buds of the Fuki near the parking lot.

A professor from Kagawa Prefecture arranged two works for us there.

When my mother got in critical condition a few months ago, the doctor recommended that close people for her come and see her. When I heard from my brother about it on the phone, I regreted one thing. That was what I had turned down my mother's offer. She had asked me to go to the hot springs together before.

She had had pneumonia, but she recovered fortunately. The doctor said that it was a miracle.
I took my son to see my parents during his spring vacation. I then went to the hot springs with my mother. I was glad to fulfill her wish.

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Recommended Corrections:

I had composed this arrangement of Viburnum Furcatum (虫狩/ムシカリ), Rose (バラ), and Gold dust dracaena (ゴッドセフィアナ) for a monthly Ikebana test, several days ago.

I took the monthly test today.
I found some flower buds of the Fuki near the parking lot.

A professor from Kagawa Prefecture arranged two works for us there.

When my mother was in critical condition a few months ago, the doctor recommended that people close to her go and see her. When I heard from my brother about it on the phone, I immediately regretted one thing; my mother had previously asked me to go with her to a hot springs, and I had turned her down.
She had had pneumonia, but fortunately, she recovered. The doctor said that it was a miracle.
I took my son to see my parents during his spring vacation. I then went to the hot springs with my mother. I was glad that I had finally fulfilled her wish.

Re: English Corrections

Hello, Shiroi Tora.

Thank you very much for the corrections as always.
My mother is still looking forward to going to a hot springs with me again.

By the way, is 'a hot springs' you had corrected right?

Sakae's Question

Sakae's Question:

By the way, is 'a hot springs' you had corrected right?


My Reply:

Yes, because which hot spring was not specified. There are many hot springs in Japan, and, I assume, in your area. If there is only one in your area, you still can not assume that all of your readers would know which one you are talking about. So, you would have to say something like, "...the hot springs in our town." Once it is specified, it could be referred to as "the hot spring."

Re: Sakae's Question

Hello, Shoroi Tora.

Thank you very much for the answer.
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Welcome to my blog.
I'm married and we have a son. I live in Hokkaido, Japan.
I like handmade things and Ikebana(arranging flowers).
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